1.6.07

The Bounty

stupid stupid stupid.
rapid, lucid, rabid.
inducive. conclusive
i shan't bother any longer.

i'll clench my fists and grind my teeth.
do the required to commence retreat.

dive headfirst into the pitch black sea.
furthur below, on an inward spiral.
journey commences from disgust of me.
i shan't bother any longer.

blessed oblivion, embrace me.

5 comments:

I.D. said...

'inductive. conclusive'

why do i have this feeling that this fabulously brilliant piece of poetry stems from my critisisms of you?hehe ;)

Aditya Kaushik said...

probably because the hyperactivity of your sub conscience mind noticed every word in the first 2 lines ends with your initials. :P

and its inducive. which means influencing. influenced by my frustration to have to explain. hence "i shan't bother any longer"

ofcourse, your left out. i shall bother you vurrryy much. like now. you see i'm a libertarian and true liberty can only be achieved when one's delusions are shattered.

I.D. said...

this can go on forever...i grind my teeth and commence retreat and
come back to the main point that you write awesome poetry. loved it.

Aditya Kaushik said...

i write stupid poetry. more like limericks. thanks :P

I.D. said...

limericks are more like

once upon a time there was a man from kabam,
he loved eating sugar, he loved eating jam.
he was told by the doctor, soon he'd die
but he kept eating,the stubborn man from kajam.